400 words minus the prompt: It wasn't until later, in his room, that Paul found the little vomit stain on his trousers...
Paul in his hotel room, magic spells, and death.
I do ask for feedback on this if at all possible.
Thank you for reading.
Does it flow?
Would you read further?
Are the characters unique, sympathetic, and interesting?
Is the story interesting, fresh, not a rehash?
Offer your suggestions to get it tight. Point out faults in grammar and spelling-word processors are not perfect nor am I. I try to be fair and ask the same of you. Here's one I've offered.
My Nighttime Wonder
Critique same as above link:
Will there be feedback this time? I wonder...